This story was an experiment in suspense, inspired by the movie "Friday the 13th." The most powerful element of a sexual story is anticipation. So I had the idea that a sexual story could use suspense the same way that a horror movie does. Show the audience what can happen, setup a situation where it can happen again, and then draw it out.
But there is a difference between sexy stories and horror stories. In sexy stories, the audience is enticed because they WANT to see what happens. In a horror story, the audience doesn't want to see the event happen, but they're enticed by their curiosity of how the characters might escape it.
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