- emerging - suspense graph -
approach house
girls arrive

0		tease  "I wanna play with you"
6		nude
4		sign:  no clothes allowed
8		close door
6		nude
3		lesbian grope
8		rule:  have to play
9		lesbian hump-hug
7		undress boy
10	horny poses
2		suck him dry
11	moaning
9		sex




0		
6		******
4		****

8		********
6		******
3		***

8		********
9		*********
7		*******
10	**********
2		**
11	***********
9		*********
		
		
		
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- revised - suspense graph -
approach house
girls arrive

4		change sign  (spontaneous idea)

8		close door  (hint at entrapment)
6		nude girl
1		they pick game  (truth or dare)
2		instruction:  take my clothes off

9		horny  touch-me
8		rule:  has to play games
7		girls undress boy  (during rules:  no clothes allowed)
4		(describe impending actions)

11	cut-away sounds
9		see sex
8		attach leash  (spontaneous idea)
4		girls state their sexy future plans for next time  (setup for repeat)



4		****

8		********
6		******
1		*
2		**

9		*********
8		********
7		*******
4		****

11	***********
9		*********
8		********
4		****



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- draft - Build-up -
* approach house
* girls arrive
close door  (hint at entrapment)
change sign  (spontaneous idea)
 boy likes this idea
girls undress boy  (during rules:  no clothes allowed)
attach leash  (spontaneous idea)
they pick game  (truth or dare)
 boy likes this idea  "I like where this is going"
rule:  has to play games
take my clothes off
	(describe impending actions)
horny  touch-me
see sex
girls state their future plans for next time  (setup for repeat)
cut-away sounds


- draft - suspense graph -
approach house
girls arrive
8		close door  (hint at entrapment)
4		change sign  (spontaneous idea)
7		girls undress boy  (during rules:  no clothes allowed)
8		attach leash  (spontaneous idea)
1		they pick game  (truth or dare)
8		rule:  has to play games
2		take my clothes off
5
6
4	(describe impending actions)
9		horny  touch-me
9		see sex
0		girls state their future plans for next time  (setup for repeat)
11	cut-away sounds


8		********
4		****
7		*******
8		********
1		*
8		********
2		**
5		*****
6		******
4		****
9		*********
9		*********
0		
11	***********